雅思小作文-柱状图

雅思小作文 – 柱状图

题目1：The chart below contains information provided by Australia’s tertiary institutions

about the percentage of male and female students enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

范文：

首段

改写题目

The bar chart shows gender difference in enrolment of different university

subjects in Australia in 1995.

主体部分第一段：因为没有时间，所以没有趋势，这是个静态图。可以选择男人或者女人最流行的科目读

起，譬如男性的engineering，也可以从男女差别的最高级开始描述，注意分组

差别的最高值

The biggest gender difference was observed in Engineering, where 19% of students chose this

subject, in marked contrast to 2% of female students.

差别的第二和

第三最高值

女性的第三最

高值

女性的第二最

高值

女性的第三最

高值

The predominance of male students was also evident in Maths & Sciences (14% compared to

7%) and Computing(10% versus 4%)

Female students’ favorite subject appear to be Arts & Humanities, where they outnumbered

male students (19% to 13%).

Health was another female-dominated subject, attracting 15% of female students, more than

three times the enrollment rate of males (only 4%).

Female students were also more likely to study Education than male students (10% in

comparison with 6%)

主体部分第二段（从女性的最高值开始描述，注意分组！）

主体部分第三段（其余的科目）

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第一个科目

第二个科目

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总结趋势和主

要特征

In Accounting & Economics ,selected by 13% male students and 11% of female students, the

gender gap was narrow.

Likewise, in Business Studies , the enrolment rate of female students (9%) was closely matched

by that of males(8%)

Overall, scientific subjects were basically male-dominated while Arts and Humanities are favored

more by female students than by male students. The gender gap was smaller in business-related

subjects.

(word account: 184 words)

题目2：The chart below contains information about USA marriage and divorce rates between

1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

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读图：动态图【因为有时间】，需要描述变化趋势

These two graphs illustrate the change of marital status of American between 1970 and 2000.【改写题目】

According to the first graph, there were 2.5m marriages in both 1970 and 1980, and then this figure

decreased gradually during the next two decades, reaching to 2m in 2000. By comparison, the number of divorces

first increased from 1m in 1970 to around 1.4 in 1980 and then slowly declined back to 1m in 2000.【分类描述第

一幅柱状图，时态：一般过去时】

As can be seen from the second bar chart，the percentage of married American adults dropped by more than

10% , from 70% in 1970 to less than 60% in 2000. Meanwhile, the percentage of adult Americans who were never

married increased from about 15% in 1970 to 20% in 2000, and despite still less than 10% , the proportion of

divorced adults significantly went up from 1970 to 2000. Moreover, the percentages of the widowed in 1970 and

2000 accounted for less than 10% respectively, and showed a slight drop.【分类描述第二幅柱状图，时态：一般

过去时】

In conclusion, marital status of Americans in 2000 was not as optimistic as that of three decades ago. (178

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点评：

1. 如果有两幅图表，则分成2段分别一一描述

2. 表示数值上升下降的常用句式有：

 The number of …dropped from … to …

 The percentage of …increased from about … to less than…

 The proportion of … significantly went up from … to …

3. 切忌没有结论。不要忽视写作最后一句话，这句话体现了你真正看到了这两幅图表的价值。【如上面这

篇范文，这些纷繁的数字都在告诉我们一个消息：美国人的婚姻状态没有三十年前那样乐观了！】

4. 如果出现2-3个图表，则一一描述。

题目3：The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from

1990 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

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Sample:

The given bar chart compares the fertility rates of women from six Gulf countries for 1990 and

2000. As is observed from the given data, fertility rate has decreased over the decade and women

of Oman and Saudi Arabia had more fertility rates than women of other Golf countries.【两种柱形的

整体趋势描述】

According to the bar graph, initially in 1990, the fertility rates of women from Bahrain, Kuwait,

Qatar and UAE were from 3-4; meaning they gave birth to 3-4 children from the statistics of 1990.

Women from Oman and Saudi Arabia gave birth to more than 6 children statistically in this same year.

After ten years, the birth of children per women reduced in all of the given 6 countries. This indicates

either the less fertility rate or the tendency of taking fewer children by the women of the Gulf

countries. The declination maintained a ratio for each country and in the year 2000, the women from

Oman and Saudi Arabia produced more children than women of other 4 countries.

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