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剑4 Test 4大作文

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.

What do you think are the causes of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

话题和题型分类

教育类，原因对策型

题目分析

许多国家的学校在管理学生表现方面存在严重问题

思路提示

原因:

文化习俗，传统习惯

欠缺正确的教育理论

学校利益与学生追求不一致

学生的叛逆心理

对策:

教育者对学生的心理能够科学掌握

校方积极听取学生诉求

通过社会和传统文化来约束

Sample Answer

Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem. Many experts insist that it

is because of the students’ individual qualities, but others advocate that it is not so simple like that.

As I see it, domestic education, classmates in school and the whole education environment are

factors that contribute to this problem.

内容 详细条目

段落 段结1描述事实

构此 2 表达观点

此段首段开篇摆明观点: 学生不良行为的原因包括家庭教育、学校同学以及整个

功能 教育制度的影响。

One very strong argument is that domestic education is not enough to regulate student behaviour.

Many people are convinced that family is the first teacher for a child. A person’s temperament

forms when he or she is young and the families’ behaviour can be learnt by children easily. Thus if

their families behave horribly, they may do so. One of the solution to the problem lies with the

families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. Perhaps

parenting classes are needed to help them to do raise their children to be considerate of others and

responsible individuals.

内容 详细条目

段落 此段结构 1 论点：家庭教育不足以规范学生行为。

2 论据：孩子会学习家庭成员的不良行为。

3 解决方案：开设家长课程。

此段功能 本段是文章第二段，论述导致学生不良行为的第一个原因。

Another factor which must be taken into consideration is that school is also an environment for

students to learn from each other. If a student always communicates and studies with his

classmates, he can learn others’ behaviours in a short time, including bad performance.

Consequently, school environment cannot be neglected. High quality elementary schools could be

established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.

内容 详细条目

段落 此段结构 1 论点：在学校中，学生会相互学习。

2 论据：一直与表现不好的同学相处很可能使得该学生有不良行为。

3 解决方案：开办高质量的小学，以便在培养下一代方面为父母提供

更多帮助。

此段功能

本段是文章第三段，论述导致学生不良行为的第二个原因。

Last but not least, the whole education environment of a nation is also crucial for student behaviour.

Some students under great pressure may behave terribly. If education department lays a too heavy

burden on students, they may be stressed out, give up studying and thus do something harmful. To

solve this problem, the government should publish some guidance for students’ school work which

specifies students’ leaning objectives and make some changes to alleviate burdens on students.

内容 详细条目

段落 此段结构 1 论点：整体教育环境对学生行为也有重要影响。

2 论据：如果压力过大，学生可能放弃学习而导致做出有害的行为。

3 解决方案：政府应该出台指导政策减轻学生负担。